Excercises 5.1 & 5.2

5.1
I cut my paper into two sections. One of those being the written words of my very own voice and the other of my sources. I've come to the conclusion that I need much more than what I have provided thusfar. I'm lacking many sources, and I've even noticed now that I have used the same sources more than once, and didn't catch it until just now. I have more work ahead of me than what is shown. I need a much longer introduction and a conclusion. I want to dig deep into what's been said and get into more detail about each paragraph. Possibly combine a few and make my paper run more smoothly.

5.2
My thesis is: Online dating is just as safe and / or dangerous as it is to date someone face-to-face, blind date, etc.
-I want to get through to my readers that with the bad, there's always good! Meaning; if you just take a risk at what you may think is scary, you could be surprised at what the outcome "could" be.
1. Why do people look so down upon online dating?
2. What are the good outcomes of an online relationship? - benefits
3. Why am I dating someone online?
4. What is so great about online dating- what's the big buzz???

* Sources that I want to find, are those more detailed in the information that I am trying to seek, such as what is stated above. I just want to dig a lot deeper and find out more information to better support my paper.